POSTCARDS: Jacob Bug butterfly 1. As a group the more bold graphic style and illustration work. The use of the brush to emphasize the painterly idea is best in your 2nd 2. The Science fiction feel does not come across as strong as the others but your technique is good. Perhaps some texture on top of the grass or some other form of illustration and photo integration would help. 2. I really like the way the image falls out of the frame. As you have worked thought he project and looked at artists I feel you are getting more experimental with your own visual language. The white is in high contrast to the rest of the image – perhaps some different value to the color could have helped 3. You really worked hard on pushing this image further – Congratulations! The increased illustration technique – adding lines with variety, shape variation pulled you away from the very flat image. It would have been interesting to keep going refining and playing with your technique variety . good composition.
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1. As a group the more bold graphic style and illustration work. The use of the brush to emphasize the painterly idea is best in your 2nd 2. The Science fiction feel does not come across as strong as the others but your technique is good. Perhaps some texture on top of the grass or some other form of illustration and photo integration would help.
2. I really like the way the image falls out of the frame. As you have worked thought he project and looked at artists I feel you are getting more experimental with your own visual language. The white is in high contrast to the rest of the image – perhaps some different value to the color could have helped
3. You really worked hard on pushing this image further – Congratulations! The increased illustration technique – adding lines with variety, shape variation pulled you away from the very flat image. It would have been interesting to keep going refining and playing with your technique variety . good composition.